Comments on: It’s the brand new product the world’s been waiting for! http://www.jordanlapp.com/its-the-brand-new-product-the-worlds-been-waiting-for Resources for the genre writer Tue, 07 Feb 2012 13:04:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Jordan Lapp http://www.jordanlapp.com/its-the-brand-new-product-the-worlds-been-waiting-for/comment-page-1#comment-1713 Jordan Lapp Tue, 24 Mar 2009 20:44:39 +0000 http://www.jordanlapp.com/withoutreallytrying/?p=245#comment-1713 First person RULES! it's an easy place where you can tell instead of showing, and people expect that. First person RULES! it’s an easy place where you can tell instead of showing, and people expect that.

]]> By: Jeff Draper http://www.jordanlapp.com/its-the-brand-new-product-the-worlds-been-waiting-for/comment-page-1#comment-1697 Jeff Draper Fri, 20 Mar 2009 10:52:59 +0000 http://www.jordanlapp.com/withoutreallytrying/?p=245#comment-1697 Very clever sleight of hand! Now instead of saying something like 'first person sucks' I have to say 'hilarious!' Tricksey! Very tricksey. Very clever sleight of hand! Now instead of saying something like ‘first person sucks’ I have to say ‘hilarious!’

Tricksey! Very tricksey.

]]> By: Jordan Lapp http://www.jordanlapp.com/its-the-brand-new-product-the-worlds-been-waiting-for/comment-page-1#comment-1689 Jordan Lapp Thu, 19 Mar 2009 16:14:47 +0000 http://www.jordanlapp.com/withoutreallytrying/?p=245#comment-1689 Thanks, Tracie! Thanks, Tracie!

]]> By: Tracie W. http://www.jordanlapp.com/its-the-brand-new-product-the-worlds-been-waiting-for/comment-page-1#comment-1688 Tracie W. Thu, 19 Mar 2009 15:37:30 +0000 http://www.jordanlapp.com/withoutreallytrying/?p=245#comment-1688 Your post got me thinking, and I'm working on a new third-person bit right now. So, thanks, even if nobody else said that. Your post got me thinking, and I’m working on a new third-person bit right now. So, thanks, even if nobody else said that.

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