So, I’m writing this article so that later, I’ll have proof that I coined this term.

The Red Baron is something that is better explained through example.

Say you are writing a WWI story. Your protagonist is fighting the Germans, but the Germans are a faceless bunch and therefore not particularly exciting. To add tension, you invent a Red Baron-type character. You take ONE German, humanize him, give him a history, give him panache… and then make him really skilled and awful (no idea if the original Red Baron was evil, this is just an example). To your readers, the Red Baron becomes a stand-in for “the Germans”, and if the Red Baron is evil, all Germans become evil. By contrast, your protagonist becomes “good”, which helps to generate sympathy.

The Red Baron makes your story go from a hero fighting a nameless, faceless enemy, to a pitched battle between well-developed, gripping characters.

Now, there’s probably a literary term for what I’m describing. If there is, please leave the name in the comments. Otherwise, it shall be forever known as “The Red Baron”!

EDIT: Okay, forever is pretty damn short. Andrew LeBlanc shortened it to A Red Baron in this article, which is well worth reading. Now what are the rest of you waiting for? Let’s popularize this thing!

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1   RS    http://robertswartwood.wordpress.com/
January 10th, 2009 at 1:40 am

What’s even stranger, the Red Baron always seems to look like Tom Selleck …

2   jordan    http://www.everydayfiction.com
January 10th, 2009 at 9:43 am

It’s gotta be the mustache. ;)

3   Jason    http://www.jasonmwaltz.com/thoughts/
January 10th, 2009 at 12:01 pm

Fun term, Jordan; excellent write-up by Andrew also.

I also coined and claimed a literary term back in April 2007. In attempting to properly define/describe a story I wrote, I created the term Fedora Fiction as a subgenre of the hardboilded dective tale. Not quite mystery, more accurately thriller, yet obviously containing a detective protagonist with components of but not adherence to the pulp hardboileds. I didn’t feel my (now) stories fell into any of the existing genre specifics I could find, so I went with what I felt best defined what I wrote. To make it even more accurate, I’ve included a fedora as part of my detective’s attire – but I’ve yet to decide if that is a necessary component of the subgenre or not. I’ll leave that to posterity’s whim ;)

4   Jason    http://www.jasonmwaltz.com/thoughts/
January 10th, 2009 at 12:03 pm

I wish I could edit spelling errors but oh well. Besides, I forgot to check the ‘notify me of followup’ box, so I had to post a second time anyway:)

5   jordan    http://www.everydayfiction.com
January 11th, 2009 at 6:44 pm

Jason, Believe it or not, I remember that article! You published it right around when we met on SFReader. Okay, so let’s start publicizing these babies! I know just how to use “Fedora Fiction” >:)

6   Red Baron    http://roterbaron.wordpress.com/
March 2nd, 2009 at 7:09 am

The fact that you see the Germans as a faceless bunch and not particularly exciting is merely the embodiment of history being the victor’s version, I don’t direct that at you but at the teaching of history these days. Though when it comes to WWI flying aces how many can most people actually name, for most Mannfred Von Richtofen has acquired an unparalleled cult status across the world which cannot be said of most Captains killed at 26 after 2 years combat service.

In real life he did not have a moustache.

I like the idea of your term but I think this may not be the correct nomenklature for it.

7   jordan    http://www.everydayfiction.com
March 2nd, 2009 at 6:20 pm

Hi Red Baron,

I wasn’t implying that >I< see the Germans as a faceless bunch (I’m some part German myself). I merely meant the label “The Germans” tells us nothing about individual soldiers in the same way that saying “the crowd” tells us nothing about the makeup of said crowd.

I’m open to a change of term. What would you suggest?

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    [...] My friend Jordan recently made a post in which he invents a term, and then lays claim to it. The post is relatively small, and doesn’t really serve any purpose other than marking the time and date and claimed word. [...]

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